This week we had a go in class at the challenge (you're welcome to submit another one from home if you wish!)... This week, you have the chance to practice writing speech! The prompt is: …”but where did it go?” she shouted...
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Flora
10/24/2019 12:15:21 pm
Jemma, who was usually very organised, was yet again looking for her phone. Her long red hair covered her beloved gadget.
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Emily
10/24/2019 12:16:23 pm
As the sun crept over the hills, Liz , who was 13 years old , was staying in Hawii for an amazing week. One hot morning - Liz and her family went to a huge shop that was filled with beautiful jewlery . She walked in through the bright blue door way; one thing caught her eye. An amazing necklace - it had crystal clear beads with a sharks tooth in the middle. So, she showed it to her Mum and she bought it for Liz.
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poppy
10/24/2019 12:18:11 pm
Crumbling, a died down and demolished city contained the last human girl on earth. Crystal had been searching for days trying to find her mechanical dog (C9A7). He was full grey but the only bits that weren't were his tail and his eyes, they were orange. Crystal was only young so she laid down some pieces of metal, they were his favorite food.
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OSCAR:)
10/24/2019 12:18:30 pm
Grazing at some grass,there was a cow called Jack who noticed a hole in the fence.Jack decided that he was bored of the the plain old field and ran as fast as he could onto the road.When the farmer noticed she started to get worried.
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Beth
10/24/2019 12:18:59 pm
Demolished,a ruined city homed the last human girl in existence.; crystal. scavenging around , crystal frantically searched for a mechanical communication for her mech-30 (her mechanical best buddy)."But where did it go." she shouted in anger as she slumped on a discarded sofa .In the deserted city of ruins. As darkness crept in crystal was still searching for they lost piece. Crystal crept inside and made a cup of tea and cooked some for communicating od for her and her pal.Crystal said tiredly "I'm going to search in the morning" with that she fell asleep. Next morning, she woke up to find the piece that she was looking for yestarday on the end of her bed.She was suprised . She put it in her pal and eventualy she was able to talk.
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patricia
10/24/2019 12:28:00 pm
"I am not a baby anymore ! I can stay at home without anybody!" she said frustrated. " No is a no," said her strict dad and went out of the door to the world. Outside , Lucia 's parents had a farm . Every Sunday she would go and get the chicken eggs from the cottage by their house.
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summer
10/24/2019 12:29:05 pm
Demolished ,a smashed city all ruined , was fallen apart last night with a little girl called Bonnie she had lost her cousin a robotic dog Moci .
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Emma
10/24/2019 12:29:56 pm
Feeling lonely and isolated on the abandoned beach, she stood feeling inconsolable as her eyes filled with tears.
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Daisy
10/24/2019 12:31:42 pm
Destroyed , a wrecked city homed to the last person standing a girl called Mollie.
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Rosie
10/24/2019 12:32:06 pm
Waking up one morning , Crystal looked out the window noticing Merodero was atrocious . buildings crashed cars on fire , she panicked and then she grabbed her boots.Opened the door and scavenged around the dimolished town she went to the stable to get her robotic horse and grabbed the saddle and headed of. After a wile she started to think to her self am i the last girl in existence.
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Ben Cox
10/24/2019 12:32:26 pm
A long time ago,my dad and I went into the woods because we were having a short stroll .But then something caught my eye ; there was an enourmous cottage in the middle of nowhere.I tell my dad and he was amazed too,when we took a step closer to the cottage something wasn't right there,there was some red gas coming out of the chimney.I asked my dad if we could go in their and he says "I don't know son that place gives me the creeps".And then I say "come on dad it can't be that bad ".so then when my dad makes his my mind up we go in . When we walked in it was amazing there was a spiral staircase and everything.I asked my dad if I can go upstairs and he says yes, so when i get upstairs I see this room glowing.I'm very suspicious and then I see a wardrobe with a chain around it.........
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chelsea
10/24/2019 12:33:44 pm
During a lovely day in space, There was a girl called Moci and she went for a walk around the moon to see all the great big meteor holes. Then a small meteor came darting at here; she caught it.
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joe
10/24/2019 12:33:57 pm
Jenny , who had just came back from a luxurios holiday in Italy , opend the door to her house she saw her cat sitting on the lamp she walked further in she peered round into the lounge she saw : a huge mess , cracked windows , a sofa that had been tipped over and all her clothes scatterd over the carpet . Jenny paused for a second and looked at the jewelery box it was open. Her mum gave it to her when she was little ,she took a step closer and the ring was gone "But where did it go?"She shouted .She observed everywhere but it was nowhere to be seen but she had an idea of where it could be .So she quickly rushed into where her cat had been sitting and there it was on her cat's claw she sighed with relief.
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AIDEN
10/24/2019 12:34:02 pm
One furturistic day , there was a young girl (who was called Bonny)when Bonny came back from her hotel which she had very luscious sight from her balcony. she saw that her flying scooter was missing from her garage, so she checked with her mum but she hadn't seen it since they had left.Bonny looked all over the city but it was no where to be seen so she checked with her friends but all of her friends had not seen ."but where did it go !" she shouted so she checked in the spot where she was not allowed which was in the deepest and darkest ally way in the city . But she found it so she had went back safetly and started to play on it . But just as she went back in her mum told her off-but she was still proud.
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Issy
10/24/2019 12:34:18 pm
dark and gloomy, the trees of the undiscovered forest leaned above overgrown and barely noticeable paths; which had someone walking on them.
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George
10/24/2019 12:34:25 pm
Battered, a ruined city, home to a young girl called Emerald, which was the last living mamal in existence. Searching around, Emerald was hunting frantically for a mechanical communicator for BB8 (her mechanical).
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Ben L
10/24/2019 12:34:47 pm
In the heart of a forest, Chloe and her partner Max were chasing a mysterious creature. It had brutally murdered 4 innocent souls over the course of 7 horrific days . So Chloe and Max had to stop it. 'Over there,' Max shouted to his college. But as she turned to look everything went black.She woke up 2 minuetes later.
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Toby
10/24/2019 12:36:47 pm
In a city there was a boy called Ben in his room looking out a window he saw lights and stars . Then Ben saw a figure in the dark he didn't have the light on in the room but he did have a flashlight under his bed so Ben gone under his bed to grab his flashlight slowly and turned it on he looked out side the window but there was nothing there
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ADAM
11/5/2019 04:30:41 pm
George was looking wildly at the horizon in the artic trying to find a penguin , he looked as hard as he could with his new friend Bob but they could not see much because they were on a iceberg . They were on a carpet and they drove on a artic express (it looked like a granny mobile) they saw a polar bear trying to build a shelter ''do you need help Mr.Polar Bear?'' said George
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Liliah
11/14/2019 03:46:50 pm
I couldn't think of what to write,
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